Yoshimoto Island - Travel To Prince Rocky's Island (Cancelled)

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Post #1by Yoshimoto » 4 Jan 2015, 22:50

Nothing here.
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Post #2by Sambo » 10 May 2015, 0:44

The colors on that background are way too bright. You may want to tone them down a bit. Also, it seems like you have a lot of worlds, especially for a first episode. I would recommend that you only have 8 worlds. Otherwise you may find that you feel overwhelmed by all the levels you need to finish, and you'll likely run out of level ideas before completion.

From this screenshot, the level also looks pretty empty. You should put down a couple more enemies and some coins. Pipes would also be a good idea. I mean, this is a Mario game, after all. What's a Mario game without pipes?
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Post #3by Yoshimoto » 12 May 2015, 0:02

Please lock.


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