Majestic___ wrote: Greendan wrote:
Few things could be improved, but it still looks good overall. Good work!
Like what?? I don't mind a bit of constructive criticism. but thank you tho
The main problem I've noticed are with some of the backgrounds. They need some more improvement in the colour balance, otherwise they clash a bit. For example, the clouds in the desert screenshot. Their colour sholdn't be bright blue, since the rest of the environment is under the effect of the sunset. You can fix that by changing the clouds' colour to orange or red.
Also, in the last screenshot those oversaturated blue clouds look kinda weird and unfitting. Judging by the the tileset and the lava, I can guess that this is supposed to be a volcano/lava themed level, but since when the magma clouds are blue?
There are some minor level design issues as well, but they could be improved over time with more practice and work.